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1ACCWC#518 - CIGARETTE

Total Clues: 23 Total Voters: 27

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# Name Clue Points Voters Anno Comments
1 Manish Jhaveri Criminal I target in church is one among a pack of killers (9) 32 18 ITARGET* in CE; def = one among a pack of killers - The definition would benefit from a question mark.
- Excellent!
- I like the definition particularly
2 Satyen Nabar Get article about giving up ultimately harmful product causing cancer (9) 26 17 (GET ARTICLE)* - L; about= anag ind, giving up= deletion ind, ultimately harmful= L (last letter selection), def= product causing cancer. - Love this. Think there may be grammatical grumbling about the positioning of ‘ultimately’ - perhaps could be ‘the last of’ instead?
3 N Anantakrishnan Caught wild tiger at edge of jungle - it can be dangerous 21 15 C (tiger at)* e Def - it can be dangerous ---
4 Abhay Phadnis Fag end of big title race disrupted after student drops out (9) 20 15 Definition: Fag; "end of biG"=G; [G TITLE RACE] "disrupted" (anagrind) "after student (L) drops out" = [G+TITE+RACE]* = CIGARETTE ---
5 Hari Mannarsamy Get care! It could be a Health hazard! 19 14 (Get care it)* - ''Get care'' is not a standard expression - clunky surface
6 Veera Raghavan Starts to ignite gathered tinder, creates mostly swirling smoke (9) 19 12 (I G T CREATE)*. Swirling is anagrind. Definition: smoke - Nice definition!
- Nice surface
7 Ganesh Raman Spooner's fix? A place for a smoke 16 8 Spoonerism of "Rig (fix) a set (place)" Def on the right - cheeky and fun
8 Adman_i Dazzling E-car GT, I note, emits no smoke (9) 13 10 E-car GT : Electric car Grand Tourer, Dazzling : Anagrind, Emits : del ind, Smoke (Definition) : (ECAR + GT + I)* + (NOTE - NO) ---
9 Sitter This is often tipped, but not by medical professionals! 12 6 Self-explanatory CD - Very neat
10 Kalyan Bandyopadhyay Tragic! French and English invention is a potential killer (9) 11 9 [TRAGIC + ET (and in French) + E (English)]* indicated by invention. Def. A potential killer - Good surface & wordplay
11 --- Joint Chiefs (of course including General Allvin) report exclusively to the executive (9) 11 8 Acrostic, indicated by “chiefs of”; def.: “joint”. Surface refers to US military advisors; General David W. Allvin is Chief of Staff of the US Air Force - The brackets are disruptive and interrupt the cryptic grammar
12 --- Spooner says "Fix a group something unhealthy" (9) 11 6 "Rig a set" spoonerism, def = something unhealthy ---
13 --- Drawing on this could be teratogenic (9) 10 5 &lit comp. anag.*ON CIGARETTE = TERATOGENIC. For the surface drawing on = inhaling, for the cryptic drawing = eviscerating. Teratogenic means harmful to a fetus. - Superb.
- This is very clever! But ‘drawing = eviscerating’ suggests dropping middle letters, rather than anagramming (which is adequately indicated by ‘could be’ anyway)
- Great construction, but drawing as eviscerating suggests removing inner parts, not anagramming
14 --- Smoke big descaled fish in this, Provençal style (9) 9 7 [b]I[g]+GAR in CETTE, French for “this” - Not completely convinced by descaled as outer letters removal. This provencal style is good though
15 --- Joint etc. rolled up, inhaling air, get high (9) 8 6 C(IGARET*)TE< Def: Joint, Rolled up - Reversal indicator, High - Anagram indicator ---
16 --- Roll it and eventually die...tragic (9) 8 6 Anagram of (IT E TRAGIC), roll is anagram ind, whole clue is def - alea jacta est
- Wrong anag. Extra i, missing e
17 --- Quote covers renovation of great joint (9) 7 5 Cite around anagram of great. Definition = joint ---
18 --- One of a Group of Twenty, perhaps, give credit to revolutionary Greta's interrupting! (9) 7 5 CI(GARET*)TE; [give credit to] = CITE; [revolutionary Greta] = GARET*; ['s interrupting] = container indicator; surface references the G20 (where Greta Thunberg might protest) and the standard size of a pack of cigarettes - Sorry I didn’t have points left for this! I love the whole idea but surface doesn’t quite flow for me!
- In the surface reading, “give” doesn’t agree in number with “one”
19 --- Worry about police officer approaching railway employee for nicotine roll(9) 4 3 Definition: Nicotine roll. Anno: (C(IG)ARE)(TTE). Worry - Care. Police officer - IG. Railway employee - TTE. About - Containment indicator. ---
20 --- Mention about fish touching alien's butt(9) 3 3 Mention is cite/ about is container indicator/fish is gar/ alien is et/ butt is definition - There are a few clues using ‘butt’ as a definition - maybe I’m being too fussy but for me that’s just a part of a cigarette, not a synonym.
21 --- Setter tragically loses the right to hold back his butt(9) 2 2 sETTER AGICally (loses right, RT missing) read back within - losing would be better cryptic grammar
- Deserves a mention for creativity - didn’t quite work for me but think it has the makings of something brilliant! Would certainly remove ‘the’ and think surface doesn’t quite make enough sense to me.
- Good wordplay. Less fussed on def & surface though.
22 --- North gone for good in unusually nice treat for a smoker! 1 1 Anagram of NICE TREAT but with North (N) 'gone for' good (G) - I don''t think the definition works here smoker is an agent noun not what is smoked. It''s not slang that I''ve ever heard for a ciggie either.
23 --- Tragically eat tiger (cold)? It's an abomination! (9) 0 0 Anagram indicator: TRAGICALLY, Fodder: eat tiger c. Definition: It's an abomination. - I loved this other than I can’t make ‘tragically’ work as an anagram indicator sorry! Wondered if something like ‘bizarrely’ might work better
- Def is rather vague